آموزش رایتینگ آکادمیک pie chart

در این درس قصد داریم بار دیگر نمودارهای Pie Chart را بررسی کنیم، اما این بار با یک نمودار جدول مثال آمده است. آموزش رایتینگ آکادمیک pie chart با جواب و تمرین با زبانی ساده به شما نحوه نوشتن نمودارهای pie chart را نشان می‌دهد. آموزش رایتینگ آکادمیک pie chart به صورت جامع در دو بخش با مثال و تحلیل و جزئیات جهت کسب مهارت نمره ielts writing 7 آمده است.

طبق آمار گرفته شده در یک سال گذشته، بیشتر آزمون‌دهندگان ادعا کرده‌اند که نمودار Pie Chart در سوال رایتینگ آکادمیک تسک یک آنها آمده است.

این نمودار ارقام متفاوتی را مانند درصد هر صنعت در تولید ناخالص یک کشور یا میزان مشارکت افراد قبل و بعداز بازسازی یک موزه و موارد دیگر را نشان می‌دهد. اگر Pie Chart با یک نمودار دیگر (مثلا” جدول) آمده باشد، بهتر است علاوه بر توضیح هر نمودار، این دو را با هم مقایسه کنید. برای تمرین بیشتر از نمونه سوالات رایتینگ آکادمیک سایت و کتاب‏ های رسمی کمبریج بهره بگیرید.

در دو بخش آموزش رایتینگ آکادمیک pie chart، مثال و تحلیل با جزئیات کامل جهت کسب مهارت نمره 7 ielts آمده است. برای خواندن دایره لغات و گرامر مربوط به رایتینگ آکادمیک تسک 1 اینجا کلیک کنید. 

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شبیه یک pie chart است!

Model answer: Visitors to a museum, 2 Pie Charts with a Table and exercise

لیست مطالب

رایتینگ pie chart چگونه نوشته می شود؟

  1. Paraphrase the task question

  2. Write a general overview of the main features (no statistics or detail here)

  3. Body paragraph 1: write in detail about feature 1 logically

  4. Body paragraph 2: write in detail about feature 2 logically

مثال یک pie chart با table

این نمودار Pie Chart از کتاب کمبریج 11 آیلتس آمده است، شما می توانید از کتاب فروشی ها یا pdf آن را از سایت تهیه کنید. توصیه می کنیم که همیشه از مطالب رسمی آیلتس یا کتاب های کمبریج آیلتس استفاده کنید.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words

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آموزش رایتینگ آکادمیک pie chart

پاراگراف مقدمه پای چارت

اولین قدم برای IELTS Writing task 1 Academic این است که سؤال را Paraphrase کنیم. کلمات و جملاتی را که در زیر به رنگ سبز آمده است، Paraphrase شده است.

Original task question
The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Paraphrased version
The table illustrates the proportion of people who visited Ashdown museum in the year before and the year after refurbishment. Visitors were surveyed about their satisfaction during their visit. The pie charts indicate the result of the surveys in the same two periods.

کلمات “table” یا “chart” را که قابل تغییر نیستند را نقل نکردایم، و همچنین عبارت “the year before and year after” و “the result of the surveys” را تغییر ندادیم. در پاراگراف مقدمه نیازی نیست که تک تک کلمات را به صورت پارافریز بیان کنید.

پاراگراف Overview

در پاراگراف overview باید اطلاعات کلیدی را نقل کنیم و ویژگی های اصلی جدول و نمودار را به صورت خلاصه بنویسیم. در اینجا هیچ آماری (اعداد و ارقام) ننویسید یا به جزئیات بیش از حد نروید. در پاراگراف‌های Body به جزئیات بیشتری خواهیم پرداخت.

Overall, In the year after refurbishment visitor numbers had increased considerably, which indicated they were much happier about their visit. Prior to the renovation, a larger number of people expressed dissatisfaction with their visit.

پاراگراف‌های body

اکنون زمان آن رسیده که داده ها را گروه بندی کنیم و با جزئیات بیشتری در مورد آمارها و روندها ببنویسیم. در پاراگراف Body 1، در مورد سال قبل از نوسازی خواهیم نوشت و در Body 2، جزئیات مربوط به سال بعد از بازسازی را می‌نویسیم. مهمترین نکته در پارپراف body گروه بندی داده ها است.

In the year before renovations total visitor numbers stood at 74, 000. Less than a fifth of those were very satisfied with their time at the museum. On the same note, just under a third of visitors indicated that they were satisfied. In contrast, two-fifths of total visitors showed they were dissatisfied and accounted for 40% of visits. One in ten people said they had been very dissatisfied before renovations were made to the museum. A small minority did not respond to the survey before or after the renovation work.

With regards to the year after work was carried out, there were an extra 18,000 visitors totalling 92,000. In addition, the charts show a considerable change in the number of people who claimed they were happy with their visit to the museum. The number of people who were satisfied jumped by 10%. Likewise, the number of very satisfied visitors increased to almost two fifths. In comparison to the year prior to refurbishment dissatisfaction levels saw a sharp decline and dropped from two fifths to less than a fifth. Very dissatisfied visitors had halved.

Note: This is actually far too long but I have done this for example purposes to show how to paraphrase statistics and demonstrate the grammar that is needed. The model answer at the end has a reduced word count.

نکات گرامری

در پاراگراف‌های body، زمان ساده گذشته را با رنگ قرمز برجسته کرده‌ایم، این گرامر اصلی دستور زبان در اینجا است، زیرا دو نمودار pie chart نشانگر دو نکته در گذشته می‌باشند.

در مواردی از گرامر passive (مجهول) استفاده شده است:

renovations were made to the museum / work was carried out

نکته گرامری دیگر، استفاده از relative clauses در بندهای body است. این مورد با رنگ آبی مشخص شده است:

  • The charts show a considerable change in the number of people who claimed they were happy with their visit…
  • The number of people who were satisfied jumped by 10%

در رایتینگ آکادمیک تسک 1 ، پارافریز کسرها و درصدها بسیار مهم است زیرا شما باید در اینجا زبان را تغییر دهید.

  • Less than a fifth – 15%
  • Just under a third – 30%
  • Two fifths – 40%
  • One in ten – 10%
  • More than a third – 35%
  • From two fifths to less than a fifth – From 40% to 15%
  • Halved – dropped by half
  • a small minority – around 5% to 10% (approximation)

You also need to use phrases to show approximation and proportion such as:

  • Just over
  • Just under
  • Less than
  • More than
  • Approximately
  • Around
  • A large number of… (70%)
  • A significant proportion of …  (80%)
  • A small minority of…  (5 to 10%)
  • An insignificant amount of..  (2%)

Key point: you will notice I have used the words renovated and refurbished, these are synonyms as I didn’t want to keep repeating the same word.

تمرین (آموزش رایتینگ آکادمیک pie chart)

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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آموزش رایتینگ آکادمیک pie chart

surveyed /  the proportion of  /  indicate

The table illustrates _____________ people who visited Ashdown museum in the year before and after refurbishment. Visitors were  ___________  about their satisfaction levels during their visit. The pie charts _________ the result of the surveys in the same two periods.

Prior to /  increased considerably  /  a larger number of

Overall, in the year after refurbishment visitor numbers had _______________, which indicated they were much happier about their visit. __________ the renovation, ________________  people expressed dissatisfaction with their visit.

   accounted for / A small minority /  just under a third / Less than a fifth

In the year before renovations, total visitor numbers stood at 74,000. ______________ of those were very satisfied with their time at the museum. On the same note ________________ of visitors indicated that they were pleased. In contrast, two-fifths of total visitors showed they were dissatisfied and ______________ 40% of visits. _______________ did not respond to the survey.

dropped by / two-fifths  / accounting for / a considerable increase /

Regarding the year after refurbishment, visitor numbers increased to 92,000 and the pie charts show _________________ in those who were satisfied with their visit, ____________ more than a third (35%). Likewise, very satisfied visitors increased to almost ________ (40%). Dissatisfied visitor numbers ___________ 25%.

Model Answer

The table illustrates the proportion of people who visited the Ashdown museum in the year before and after refurbishment. Visitors were surveyed about their satisfaction levels during their visit. The pie charts indicate the result of the surveys in the same two periods.

Overall, In the year after refurbishment visitor numbers had increased considerably, which indicated they were much happier about their visit. Prior to the renovation, a larger number of people expressed dissatisfaction with their visit.

In the year before renovations, total visitor numbers stood at 74,000. Less than a fifth of those were very satisfied with their time at the museum. On the same note just under a third of visitors indicated that they were pleased. In contrast, two-fifths of total visitors showed they were dissatisfied and accounted for 40% of visits. A small minority did not respond to the survey.

Regarding the year after refurbishment, visitor numbers increased to 92,000 and the pie charts show a considerable increase in those who were satisfied with their visit, accounting for more than a third (35%). Likewise, very satisfied visitors increased to almost two fifths (40%). Dissatisfied visitor numbers dropped by 25%.

191 words


Note on word count: I advise aiming for around 160 to 180 words for task 1 academic. The minimum word count for writing task 1 is 150 words.

If you include too much detail you could lose marks. Don’t go over 200 words in task 1 academic it is not necessary.

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