نحوه پارافریز در رایتینگ آیلتس Paraphrase

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1. با سلام خدمت استاد زندی عزیز
   بنظر شما این جمله درست پارافریز شده است؟
   Many individuals believe that governments ought to fund the creative artists, for example, musicians and painters. Some others say they should find other sources of money to support these ones.

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   1. سلام و درود فراوان
      بسیار عالی نوشتید.

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2. درود بر استاد عزیز.
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3. دیدگاه من از writing اینه ک بهتر و با روشی درست پیش برم

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4. ممنون از اینکه وقت گذاشتین و پاسخ دادین سعی میکنم بهتر بنویسم

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5. سلام ممنون از مطالب خوبتون میشه برای این سوال راهنماییم کنید بنظرتون درست نوشتم
   Alot of places in the world rley on tourism as a main source of incom. Ufortunately , tourism can also be a source of problem if it isnot managed correctly.
   describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawback?
   Today’s, the tourism industry has become improved all over the world,which can be both a source of incom and a problem. I believe that if we can manege well, it will be more valueble.

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   1. سلام، با یک مقدار تغییر به جمله زیر تبدیل اش کردم:
      In recent years, the tourism industry has improved globally, which can be both source of income and a problem for societies.
      اینجا برای نوشتن جمله Thesis Statement باید جمله بلندتری در پاسخ به سوال نوشته بشه.

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6. سلام و وقت بخیر. ممنون از سایت بسیار عالی و مفید تون
   من جمله بالا را پرافریز کردم اما از درستی آن مطمئن نیستم.

   It is argued the authorities of a country should consider a certain proportion of budget to support artists’ societies. While others think they ought to be supported from different sources.
   لطفا نظر خودتان به من اعلام کنید

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   1. سلام، خیلی خوب نوشتید، من فقط یک کم تغییر دادم و به صورت bold نشان دادم:
      It is argued by some that the authorities of a country should consider a certain proportion of budget to support artists of their society, While others think they ought to be supported by different sources.

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7. با سلام و احترام , و ضمن تشکر از وبسایت بسیار خوب و پر محتوا
   آیا جواب مثال پارافریز مورد قبول هست؟

   Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians, while others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources.

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   It is often said that creative artists should be funded by governments, on the other hand, some individuals think that it could be provided by other sources

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   1. سلام ممنونم
      خیلی خوب نوشتید، به نظرم من درست پارافریز شده
      از نظر من، نمره Lexical resource و Grammatical range and accuracy خوبی میگیرید. موفق باشید

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      1. Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians, while
         others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources

         سلام جمله ی بالا رو به صورت زیر پارافریز کردم به نظرتون خوبه؟

         many people believe that the creative artist،for example painters and musicians، ought to support by government.on the other hand ،some individuals argue that it can be provide by other sources