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نمونه رایتینگ pie chart

نمونه رایتینگ pie chart

یکی از سوالات رایج آزمون آیلتس، رایتینگ نمودار پای چارت است. اگر به نمونه رایتینگ Pie Chart که در این صفحه آمده‌ است دقت کنید، مشاهده می‌کنید که دو دایره متشکل از درصد، در یک بازه 20 ساله نشان داده شده است. در بسیاری از نمونه رایتنیگ های Pie Chart آیلتس باید اطلاعات را با یکدیگر مقایسه و تضاد کنید. به این معنی که اعداد و ارقام اصلی نمودار Pie Chart را انتخاب کنید و در مورد آنها بنویسید. در این مطلب نمونه رایتینگ Pie chart با جواب و آنالیز، برای داوطلبین آزمون آیلتس ielts آمده است.

Model answer and analysis for ielts pie chart

لیست مطالب (نمونه رایتینگ pie chart)

تشخیص pie chart ایستا و پویا

داده های استاتیک بدان معنی است که نمودار، یک دوره زمانی را نشان می دهد. داده های پویا دو یا چند دوره زمانی را نشان می دهد. همچنین نشان می دهد که چگونه روندها در یک دوره زمانی تغییر می کنند.

برای نمودارهای استاتیک و نمودارهای پویا از زبانهای مختلفی استفاده می شود. همیشه اطمینان حاصل کنید که ابتدا نمودار را به خوبی تجزیه و تحلیل کرده‌اید، و مشخص کنید که نمودار یک دوره زمانی را نشان می دهد یا داده ها با گذشت زمان تغییر می کنند. اگر از Trend Language  برای نمودار استاتیک استفاده کنید، نمره گرامر را از دست خواهید داد.

تذکر: نمودار پای چارت این درس فقط برای مثال است و یک نمونه رسمی از کمبریج نیست. همیشه هنگام تمرین از منابع معتبر کمبریج آیلتس استفاده کنید.

ساختار رایتینگ pie chart

  1. Paraphrase the task question

  2. Write a general overview of the main features (no statistics or detail here)

  3. Body paragraph 1: write in detail about feature 1 logically

  4. Body paragraph 2: write in detail about feature 2 logically

مثال نمونه رایتینگ پای چارت

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words

pie charts ielts
نمونه رایتینگ pie chart

IELTS pie chart sample

The pie charts compare the amount of electricity created from five different sources of fuel in France in 1990 and 2010. These were oil, coal, natural gas, hydropower and nuclear power.

Overall, the use of nuclear power for generating electricity in France increased considerably, however, the use of natural gas declined sharply over the two decades. In addition, oil and coal saw declines and hydropower showed a slight decrease in consumption.

In 1990 nuclear power as a source of energy stood at 17% of electricity production in France. Natural gas and coal both represented 28%. Oil was not far behind, accounting for just over a fifth of energy production. however, hydropower indicated only a small proportion of energy generated in 1990 and 2010.

Looking at the data for 2010, oil and coal both followed the same pattern and saw sharp declines dropping to 13% as a source of fuel for electricity with natural gas also seeing considerably less use at 4%. Most strikingly, nuclear power became the most relied on a form of energy, comprising 67% of total electricity production in 2010.

Word count: 181

پاراگراف Introduction pie chart

در اینجا باید سوال تسک 1 را paraphrase کنید. پارافریز سوال رایتینگ، به این صورت که همان جمله را با کلمات و عبارات دیگر بنویسید.

“The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010”

Paraphrased Version:

The pie charts compare the amount of electricity created from five different sources of fuel in France in 1990 and 2010. These were oil, coal, natural gas, hydropower and nuclear power

کلمات قرمز رنگ پارافریز شده اند، در ادامه 5 نوع منبع سوخت را اضافه کرده ایم. در اینجا ما نمی‌توانیم کلمات “the pie chart” و “source of fuel” و غیره را تغییر دهیم، این اطلاعات به همان شکل باقی می مانند و پارافریز نمی شوند.

پاراگراف Overview pie chart

نکات کلیدی نمونه رایتنیگ پای چارت ، در پاراگراف overview نوشته می‌شود.

  • nuclear power increased considerably.
  • natural gas production declined sharply.
  • oil and coal also saw declines.
  • hydropower showed a slight decrease.

Overall, the use of nuclear power for generating electricity in France increased considerably, however, the use of natural gas declined sharply over the two decades. In addition, oil and coal saw declines and hydropower showed a slight decrease in consumption.

در پاراگراف Overview نوشته شده، ما از تاریخ و درصد ننوشته‌ایم ، پاراگراف Overview فقط برای معرفی و خلاصه کردن ویژگی های اصلی نمودارهای پای چارت است. در پاراگراف‌های body به جزئیات بیشتری خواهیم پرداخت. همچنین از عباراتی مانند “However” و “In addition” استفاده کرده ایم. برای عنوان زمان از “over the two decades” استفاده کردیم.

اکنون به جزئیات در مورد تغییرات و مقایسه ها در دو نمودار دایره ای با ذکر درصدها و تاریخ ها می پردازیم.

پاراگراف‌های body pie chart

In 1990 nuclear power as a source of energy stood at 17% of electricity production in France. Natural gas and coal both represented 28%. Oil was not far behind, accounting for just over a fifth of energy production. However, hydropower indicated only a small proportion of energy generated in 1990 and 2010.

Looking at the data for 2010, oil and coal both followed the same pattern and saw sharp declines dropping to 13% as a source of fuel for electricity with natural gas also seeing considerably less use at 4%. Most strikingly, nuclear power became the most relied on form of energy, comprising 67% of total electricity production in 2010.

بهتر است که به صورت منطقی اطلاعات را در Writing task 1 academic تنظیم کنید ، بنابراین می توانید به صورت زیر عمل کنید:

  • نمودار پای 1 (1990) در پاراگراف body 1
  • نمودار پای 2 (2010) در پاراگراف body 2

تقریباً در همه نمودارهای تسک 1 آکادمیک، 3 روند وجود دارد: (up, down, remaining stable) ، کاملاً ساده است و نیازی به پیچیدگی ندارد.

Double tasks in IELTS academic writing task 1

In IELTS academic writing task 1 you could get a double or multiple task, such as a table and a bar graph, a pie chart and a table, or a line graph and a table.

In this post, I will look at a Pie chart and a table from the recent Cambridge IELTS 15 book. In fact, double tasks like this are quite straightforward. Just write about the pie chart in main body one and the table in main body two and make comparisons if possible. See the model answer below and analysis.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

pie chart anthropology graduates
Source: Cambridge IELTS academic 15, page 93

Model Answer

The pie chart illustrates what Anthropology students took part in after their undergraduate course, while the table indicates what their salaries were after 5 years of working in this field.

Overall, it is evident that the vast majority of students took part in both full time and part time work after graduation, while the highest salaries seem to be in the government and freelance sector.

Looking at the pie chart, graduates who began full time work accounted for just over a half  (52%) with those in part time work comprising less than a fifth (15%). A small minority of graduates engaged in post graduate study and part time work at just 5%,  with full time postgraduate students totalling 8%. Most notably, 12% of those who graduated became unemployed.

With regard to the table, the highest earners ($100,00+) were those in the freelance and government sectors at 40% and 50% respectively. The 25,000 to 50,000 dollar wage bracket comprised the lowest figures (5 to 10%). For the private workers category, 35% of graduates were in the 50 to 75 thousand dollars range, which was the highest figure in this category.

188 words

Analysis

In this task there is no timeframe so it is static data. This means that the data doesn’t change over time. However, the task is about students who graduated, it denotes a time in the past so I wrote in the past tense here.

The overview simply covers the main features that stand out in the charts, main body one covers the data in the pie chart and main body 2 covers the main features in the table. Notice that I did not cover every bit of data as this is not necessary in task 1.

Pick out the key features such as the highest and lowest figures and cover those. The word count is 188 words here, which is long enough in task 1. Keep it under 190 words if you can as you only have 20 minutes to write this.

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